Sunday, September 25, 2016

Camping


Hannah was at the camp site with four friends and her family. Everyone was still eating and she went to find the bathroom. She walked for thirteen minutes and didn’t find anything. She went to go back, but she couldn’t find where she came from. She was lost. She suddenly started running to where she thought she came from. As she was running she heard a loud roar. There right in front of her was bear. The bear stared at her for a moment. Then the bear went up to her. She was terrified. She didn’t want to scream because the bear might hurt her, so she petted it. The bear liked her. The bear started walking away. Hannah followed. The bear finally stopped to eat. Hannah walked up to bear again and looked around. She realized the bear was eating her hotdog that was at the cabin. She was now back at the cabin. Then the bear went away and Hannah ate s’mores with her friends.

1 comment:

  1. This short story is very intense! I thought Hannah was going to get eaten by a bear. I like the setting of this story.

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