This year it has been challenging to write and essay. The most challenging was the thesis and the conclusion. Mid-year we did our big essay on the world history topic. I was having a difficult time trying to find a thesis. After I went to the writing center and we worked a little in class I found that it was improving. I also didn't know if my thesis was to long, but then I realized that it can be more than one sentence.
The conclusion was hard too. I didn't know if it was too wordy or if I was repeating myself. I asked for help and I fixed it a little, but I still struggle with it. I grew greatly on making the annotated bibliography and putting that into paragraphs. Once I got the bibliography, it was easier.
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